the seasonal blogs from 2006 to 2009

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from Sep'2009 permanent website @ The Four Seasons of Haiku

morning blusters as

the last brave magnolia

cling to the tree

3 comments:

John McDonald said...

nice one
john

Alan Summers said...

Hi jem,

I feel it's more like a renga/renku link, maybe introduce a kireji?


morning blusters
the last brave magnolia
cling to the tree
all my best,
Alan
With Words Online Haiku Competition.

jem said...

Thanks for your feedback Alan, always so helpful. You wouldn't believe how many times that 'as' was in and out!