the seasonal blogs from 2006 to 2009

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from Sep'2009 permanent website @ The Four Seasons of Haiku
wildflowers viewing
can't stop to think
of his wayward daughter

and the capriciousness
of her mother

2 comments:

nora said...

really compelling Vic. I love it.

Vic Gendrano said...

Thanks Nora. I started my poem as a haiku but decided as an afterthought to add two more lines to convert the piece into a tanka. Hope I'm a little bit successful.

BTW, it's viewing time of wildflowers, a yearly spring ritual of people here.