the seasonal blogs from 2006 to 2009

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from Sep'2009 permanent website @ The Four Seasons of Haiku
spring rain -
blossoms in the puddle
fill the sky

6 comments:

Möme said...

What an unexpected and delightful angle!

John McDonald said...

good one paul
john

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Mome & John.

Alan Summers said...

A good technique for haiku. This is very vivid without having to be told. Wonderful!

all my best,

Alan
The With Words Competition 2009

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diana l. said...

I love "fills" in the last line. It pulls me right there.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Alan & Diana, your comments mean a lot to me.