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spring mist
through white pines
the monk
walks further & further
into their silence

Pamela A. Babusci
3/1/09

8 comments:

David said...
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David said...

what I meant to write was. Beautiful! But I do think 'monks' and 'walk' sounds better than 'monk' and 'walks'.

nora said...

Just terrific, Pamela!

Pamela A. Babusci said...

david, a single monk is what i want to convey; the sabi of his aloneness
through the misty pines
his thoughts, his prayers, his single journey. one man, one path.

thanks! pamela

nora, many thanks! pamela

Paul Smith said...

Ah yes! The fullness of solitude. Beautifully captured Pamela.

Leatherdykeuk said...

lovely piece.

Beatrice V said...

Beautiful Pamela. PLS REMEMBER TO ADD NAME TO LABELS) Only this way can I call up all your poems together to read them.

David said...

I know but..........I want this perfect. 'the' not 'their' perhaps or 'into silence'. I'll shut up now.

D