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sad mourning dove without a mate
cries out his simple plea
will she come, will she answer
each new day he sings waiting
waiting for her echoing call
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1 comment:

Area 17 said...

I really enjoyed this!

Because your poem is so clear I wonder if you need 'without a mate' in the first line?

sad mourning dove
cries out his simple plea
will she come, will she answer
each new day he sings waiting
waiting for her echoing cal

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March 06, 2009

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