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from Sep'2009 permanent website @ The Four Seasons of Haiku

sad mourning dove without a mate
cries out his simple plea
will she come, will she answer
each new day he sings waiting
waiting for her echoing call

1 comment:

Alan Summers said...

I really enjoyed this!

Because your poem is so clear I wonder if you need 'without a mate' in the first line?

sad mourning dove
cries out his simple plea
will she come, will she answer
each new day he sings waiting
waiting for her echoing cal


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