the seasonal blogs from 2006 to 2009
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Hi Pratibha: maybe you would like to delete "as" from the first line and 's" from "lands" in the second line to make the haiku more suggestive?R K
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Hi Pratibha: maybe you would like to delete "as" from the first line and 's" from "lands" in the second line to make the haiku more suggestive?
R K
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