flowering cherry -
no one seems to notice me
slip into that world
.
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9 comments:
nice Paul
john
masterful use of 7-5-7 without force or excess.
I mean 5-7-5. I need more coffee...
Thank you John & Nora for your kind comments. Nora I hope the coffee has done the trick!
(I hadn't even noticed this poem was 5-7-5)
beautiful one, paul
I love this. 'that' is almost a pillow word, it's such a key word.
Excellent example of a 5/7/5 where both author, and readers including me, didn't even notice.
liked it a lot
Pamela, Alan, Reihaisha, thank you all.
ahhhhhhhh.
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