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from Sep'2009 permanent website @ The Four Seasons of Haiku
flowering cherry -
no one seems to notice me
slip into that world
.

9 comments:

John McDonald said...

nice Paul
john

nora said...

masterful use of 7-5-7 without force or excess.

nora said...

I mean 5-7-5. I need more coffee...

Paul Smith said...

Thank you John & Nora for your kind comments. Nora I hope the coffee has done the trick!
(I hadn't even noticed this poem was 5-7-5)

Pamela A. Babusci said...

beautiful one, paul

Alan Summers said...

I love this. 'that' is almost a pillow word, it's such a key word.

Excellent example of a 5/7/5 where both author, and readers including me, didn't even notice.

Reihaisha said...

liked it a lot

Paul Smith said...

Pamela, Alan, Reihaisha, thank you all.

diana l. said...

ahhhhhhhh.