first daffodils -
my wife announces
it's time for change
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4 comments:
good one paul
john
Excellent!
The haiku also contains the key elements of 'haiku humour' and 'haiku poignancy'.
all my best,
Alan
With Words
.
For Paul:
i turn down the bed
& wait for his return
in the morning
i am drowning
in a sea of yellow
Pamela A. Babusci
John, Alan & Pamela, thank you all for your kind comments (& the tanka Pamela. It's beautiful)It has been very fruitful posting here and receiving such helpful feedback.
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