your voice
a quiet whisper
and once again
the whole world
is spring
Modern English Tanka V3 No2 Winter 2008
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8 comments:
This is great!
I agree with David. beautiful.
Thank you David & Nora, I am happy that it spoke!
great one paul
john
I love the last 3 lines. The feeling reminds me of many e.e. cummings poems.
That's a really nice third line to bring us into the second part of the tanka.
I'm really looking forward to a tanka collection from you.
all my best,
Alan
The With Words Competition 2009
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beautiful. very evocative.
John, Diana, Alan, Yansidara, Thank you all for your kind comments, I am touched.
Alan as soon as I get around to compiling a collection you'll be the first to know. You are an ever present encouragement. Thank you.
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