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from Sep'2009 permanent website @ The Four Seasons of Haiku
your voice
a quiet whisper
and once again
the whole world
is spring

Modern English Tanka V3 No2 Winter 2008

8 comments:

David said...

This is great!

nora said...

I agree with David. beautiful.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you David & Nora, I am happy that it spoke!

John McDonald said...

great one paul
john

diana l. said...

I love the last 3 lines. The feeling reminds me of many e.e. cummings poems.

Alan Summers said...

That's a really nice third line to bring us into the second part of the tanka.

I'm really looking forward to a tanka collection from you.

all my best,

Alan
The With Words Competition 2009

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Yansidara said...

beautiful. very evocative.

Paul Smith said...

John, Diana, Alan, Yansidara, Thank you all for your kind comments, I am touched.

Alan as soon as I get around to compiling a collection you'll be the first to know. You are an ever present encouragement. Thank you.