This is very good, Gerald. 1. This wild bird's songs will produce notes as sharp as thorns. 2. This wild looking thorn bush will produce flowers soft as a bird's feathers. 3. The small one is not so high on the tree, but we may say that his notes have nevertheless reached the heights should we stop to listen.
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nice one Gerald
john
This is very good, Gerald.
1. This wild bird's songs will produce notes as sharp as thorns.
2. This wild looking thorn bush will produce flowers soft as a bird's feathers.
3. The small one is not so high on the tree, but we may say that his notes have nevertheless reached the heights should we stop to listen.
Good picture of the bird, and I love the choice of font for the haiku.
all my best,
Alan
The With Words Competition 2009
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