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from Sep'2009 permanent website @ The Four Seasons of Haiku
Morning tea
in the early sunshine.
Baby frogs scale the pond.
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1 comment:

nora said...

Good one, Rachel. You're getting the hang of what Jane Reichold describes as the fragment and phrase format of modern haiku. It's important that the fragment and phrase correlate, which you've done nicely here. Also, I'm glad to see you've overcome the 5-7-5 stricture that many of us struggled to forego. Ultimately, your haiku are better for it. :-)

May 31, 2009

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