the seasonal blogs from 2006 to 2009

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from Sep'2009 permanent website @ The Four Seasons of Haiku
honeysuckle scent

the moon turns

into a flared nostril
© 2009 - Publ. Blithe Spirit (Journal of the British Haiku Society) vol. 21 No 2 2011 

5 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Highly original!

You might not even need 'in the night breeze' although I rather like 'night breeze' :-)honeysuckle scent
the moon turns
into a flared nostril
all my best,

Alan

Beatrice V said...

Hi Alan,it was actually last night -really beautiful and literal, I was walking in a narrow street in Chelsea, the night almost summery, and the honeysuckle in the front garden of an old house, when I looked up, the moon was a very thin,almost curly crescent -rose-gold,like a petal or a delicate nostril.

Beatrice V said...

I agree with you, because it does sound better...will play around with it.

diana l. said...

I think I like them both!

Beatrice V said...

Thanks Diana, I think by now we are all looking forward to summer, asmweather wise, spring has been a bit of a sorry affair around here at least. Let's make the summer blog a great one too, before we move to the permanent website.