the seasonal blogs from 2006 to 2009

---------spring ----------------summer--------------autumn-----------winter -------

2006 2007 20082006 2007 2008 20092006 2007 20082006 2007 2008
from Sep'2009 permanent website @ The Four Seasons of Haiku

spring's cold pre-dawn breath
paints icy abstract patterns
on the rain-damp glass



3 comments:

martin said...

spring fever
moonlight through the window frost

David said...

this is good but try taking out 'pre dawn' and 'icy'.

Lulubelle B said...

David - Thanks for the suggestion. It is better that way. I'm learning as I go.