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TEA DROPS

Fallen tea drops
reminding me of the guests
last evening

--R.K.SINGH

5 comments:

nora said...

I like it, RK!

dMsmith said...

Love this!

R.K.SINGH said...

Thanks, friends, for stopping by this ku and enjoying reading it.
R K

Alan Summers said...

Lovely, gentle, moving.

I wonder if you could get away with using a pronoun?

Fallen tea drops
reminding me of the guests
last evening


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R.K.SINGH said...

For grammatical correctness, 'reminding me' is preferable, but i thought i would use a syllable less and let the reader imagine, whether it is 'reminding me, us, or them'.
It was a deliberate omission, which obviously is wrong.
I will correct it.
R K