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Tan Renga

i am like
a wild violet
you cannot tame
a surging tide sweeping
wide across the bay


Pamela A. Babusci
& Paul Smith
3/4/09

7 comments:

Megan Arkenberg said...

I can't tell you how pleased I am to see these tan renga--I admire both your work intensely, Pamela and Paul! This poem shows the powerful images and sensitivity to language that are the source of my admiration. Wonderful work!

~Megan

Paul Smith said...

Dear Megan, on behalf on Pamela and myself, I thank you so much for your kind comments and can assure you the feeling is mutual.

John McDonald said...

well done both again
john

Alan Summers said...

Beautifully lyrical.

Pamela A. Babusci said...

meagan, you are most kind!
i admire your poetry works as well.
thanks again! pamela

Pamela A. Babusci said...

john & alan, your words
mean so much to us.
have a blessed day!

pamela

Beatrice V said...

Wow! I love this, Pamela and Paul, your collaboration is producing some excellent results.