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from Sep'2009 permanent website @ The Four Seasons of Haiku
spring dawn -
dropping a stone
in the lake
it ripples
right through me

Modern English Tanka V3 No2 Winter 2008

5 comments:

diana l. said...

I just love this!

Pamela A. Babusci said...

just a great tanka, paul!

pamela

John McDonald said...

yes great one paul
john

Paul Smith said...

Diana, Pamela & John, thank you for your comments, they are appreciated.

David said...

This is great Paul!