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from Sep'2009 permanent website @ The Four Seasons of Haiku
pale sun -
undergrowth of snowdrops
at path's bend

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soleil pâle -
sous-bois de perce neige
au détour du sentier

4 comments:

nora said...

marvelous, Damien!

diana l. said...

I had precisely this experience on a small hike today! Thanks for capturing it so well.

Paul Smith said...

Damien, there is a wonderful lightness captured here. A lovely poem!

Alan Summers said...

Wonderful as usual. ;-)

I wonder if you might add a definite article e.g.

pale sun -
undergrowth of snowdrops
at the path's bend


You have such a deft hand it leaves me breathless.

all my best,

Alan
The With Words Competition 2009

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