the seasonal blogs from 2006 to 2009

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from Sep'2009 permanent website @ The Four Seasons of Haiku


this morning
i hold within my grasp
daffodils & your hands
i wonder which will
wither first

Pamela A. Babusci
published in Lynx 1996


Alan Summers said...

Strong tanka.

I enjoy the seasonal touch, and the unsentimental last two lines.

all my best,

The With Words Competition 2009


Pamela A. Babusci said...

dear alan,

thank you very much! you are always most kind to me & my poetry works.

hugs, pamela

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