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Tanka

this morning
i hold within my grasp
daffodils & your hands
i wonder which will
wither first

Pamela A. Babusci
published in Lynx 1996

3 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Strong tanka.

I enjoy the seasonal touch, and the unsentimental last two lines.

all my best,

Alan
The With Words Competition 2009

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Pamela A. Babusci said...

dear alan,

thank you very much! you are always most kind to me & my poetry works.

hugs, pamela

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