the seasonal blogs from 2006 to 2009

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from Sep'2009 permanent website @ The Four Seasons of Haiku

Rain


Sun surrenders as
heavenly drops kiss the lands
Yellow flaunt in green.

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1 comment:

Ram Krishna Singh said...

Hi Pratibha: maybe you would like to delete "as" from the first line and 's" from "lands" in the second line to make the haiku more suggestive?
R K

March 23, 2009

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