pale sun -
undergrowth of snowdrops
at path's bend
***
soleil pâle -
sous-bois de perce neige
au détour du sentier
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4 comments:
marvelous, Damien!
I had precisely this experience on a small hike today! Thanks for capturing it so well.
Damien, there is a wonderful lightness captured here. A lovely poem!
Wonderful as usual. ;-)
I wonder if you might add a definite article e.g.
pale sun -
undergrowth of snowdrops
at the path's bend
You have such a deft hand it leaves me breathless.
all my best,
Alan
The With Words Competition 2009
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