tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8509035047474202604.post718627862959177404..comments2023-06-01T13:16:56.579+01:00Comments on Spring Haiku 2009: AprilBeatrice Vhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09492224274542764248noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8509035047474202604.post-79387291272741771812009-04-14T09:04:00.000+01:002009-04-14T09:04:00.000+01:00I really love those two lines about the laces. I ...I really love those two lines about the laces. I haven't done that for years and years, brings back memories.<br /><br />A really nice touch of <I>wabi</I>.<br /><br />all my best,<br /><br />Alan<br /><A HREF="http://www.withwords.org.uk/comp.html" REL="nofollow">With Words Online Haiku Competition</A>.Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8509035047474202604.post-75877123314762633192009-04-02T21:29:00.000+01:002009-04-02T21:29:00.000+01:00I agree with Jim, and it reminds me of "The Nighti...I agree with Jim, and it reminds me of "The Nightingales":<BR/><BR/>My shoes as I lean<BR/>unlacing them<BR/>stand out upon<BR/>flat worsted flowers.<BR/><BR/>Nimbly the shadows<BR/>of my fingers play<BR/>unlacing<BR/>over shoes and flowers.<BR/><BR/>from Sour Grapes, 1921.<BR/>W. C. W.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8509035047474202604.post-10501880468757998662009-04-02T21:26:00.000+01:002009-04-02T21:26:00.000+01:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8509035047474202604.post-78944025472962008092009-04-02T19:35:00.000+01:002009-04-02T19:35:00.000+01:00love it! don't understand it, but love it. :-)a m...love it! don't understand it, but love it. :-)<BR/><BR/>a memorable image ...Jim Tantillohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12520467623399679472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8509035047474202604.post-78258603045448034922009-04-02T15:44:00.000+01:002009-04-02T15:44:00.000+01:00This is good. A light touch.This is good. A light touch.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14343643387576533616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8509035047474202604.post-50847619592206783102009-04-02T12:27:00.000+01:002009-04-02T12:27:00.000+01:00Very niceVery niceBeatrice Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09492224274542764248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8509035047474202604.post-56703968807280152182009-04-02T09:27:00.000+01:002009-04-02T09:27:00.000+01:00great one johngreat one <BR/>johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.com